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Sommia (V.O): What was it, Complex 202 Aberrance Centre? That was it, wasn't it? I need to start writing things down.
Sommia (V.O): “They hurt people like us?” What does she want from me?
Janaan: Sommia, are you even listening to me?
Sommia: Oh, sorry, I was distracted. What were you saying?
Janaan: I was saying she's gonna be in town in October.
Sommia: She?
Janaan: Lora Ashford. She's going to be doing a book signing. Do you suppose your dad could take us?
Sommia: Probably.
Janaan: I hope so. Can you ask him for me?
Sommia: Sure.
Sommia (V.O): “They hurt people like us?” What does she want from me?
Janaan: Sommia, are you even listening to me?
Sommia: Oh, sorry, I was distracted. What were you saying?
Janaan: I was saying she's gonna be in town in October.
Sommia: She?
Janaan: Lora Ashford. She's going to be doing a book signing. Do you suppose your dad could take us?
Sommia: Probably.
Janaan: I hope so. Can you ask him for me?
Sommia: Sure.
Looking great! love the colours! I got a bit confused by the last panel's text bubble direction though, and the first text box's crowdedness makes it a bit harder to read as well. Otherwise, awesome! Can't wait to see next week's page!
ReplyDeleteThanks. I sometimes have a bit of a hard time fitting the text onto the page, and I always appreciate knowing when something isn't quite working. I'm glad you like it!
DeleteI mean, it makes perfect logical sense, but I had to go through it a couple of times before I understood how to read it
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